What is one of the best ways to improve sentence flow in an essay? A. combine related sentences with transitional words B. begin all sentences in the same way C. make sentences a similar length D. write only complex sentences

QUESTION POSTED AT 19/02/2020 - 12:47 AM

Answered by admin AT 19/02/2020 - 12:47 AM

The correct answer is A. Combine related sentences with transitional words

Explanation:

In writing the word flow refers to the way ideas and sentences in paragraphs during a text are correctly connected forming a unit. This means a text that flows in one in which the reader feels that the ideas go in a smooth and desirable way which makes the reader understand the text better and enjoy the process of reading. Additionally, text and sentence flow depends on multiple factors including the way topic sentences which are the first sentences in a paragraph are constructed; the use of clear and concise language; avoiding repetition of words in sentence and paragraphs and most important the appropriate of words and phrases or transitions that connect and combine ideas, sentences, and paragraph which guarantees all the parts and connected and the reader can go from one to another without having a gap or disruption that breaks the flow of the text. Considering this the best way to improve sentence flow in an essay is the use of transitional words to combine and connect sentences.

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NEED HELP ASAP As the boys set out to search for the Beast, Ralph allows Jack to lead the way, and he sinks to the back of the pack, "thankful to have escaped responsibility for a time." What does this moment lead you to infer about Ralph and about his feelings about being the group’s leader? What does this moment foreshadow?

Ralph starts to feel like he needs/ wants to step back and let Jack lead the group for a while. He is slowly getting sick of all the responsibility of leading the group of boys. This foreshadows Jack's ruling of the group as Ralph becomes more of a follower. 

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 01:00 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 01:00 PM

Select all the correct answers. Wendy is writing the first draft of her research paper about symbolism used in George Orwell’s Animal Farm. Why should Wendy take short breaks while writing the draft? Wendy can read what she has written after a break and plan the best way to continue. Wendy can read what she has written after a break and edit any grammar and spelling mistakes. Wendy can use her break to find out what approach her classmates are taking. Wendy can get a better perspective of what needs to be included in her essay and how it should be presented. Wendy can use the time to get started on her other school assignments.

Answer:

Wendy should take short breaks while writing the draft so:

* Wendy can read what she has written after a break and plan the best way to continue.

* Wendy can get a better perspective of what needs to be included in her essay and how it should be presented.

Explanation:

It is suggested that Wendy should tale short breaks while she is writing the draft that means that she has not finished it, revisions are made until the writer finishes the draft, so she can just read it to keep on going with the rest, and after a little break she has a fresh vision of the work she is making and she can improve it before finishing it.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:59 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:59 PM

1. All of the following lines from "Cranes" demonstrate the story's message about the effects of war on people except. A. "The northern village at the border of the Thirty-eighth Parallel was snugly settled under the high, bright autumn sky."**** B. "Then he suddenly he thought that Tokchae,too, must want a puff. But today, how could he offer a cigarette to a fellow like this?" C. "They made me vice-chairman of the league because I was one of the poorest and I was a hard-working farmer. If that constitutes a crime worthy of death, so be it." D. "I thought of evacuating, even if I hd to carry my father on my back. But my father said no. How could the farmers leave the land behind when the crops were ready for harvest?" 2. Read the following paragraphs from "Cranes." Without a moment's delay, still out of breath from running, they untied the crane's feet and wings. But the bird could hardly walk. It must have been worn out from being bound. The two held it up in the air. Then, all of a sudden, a shot was fired. The crane fluttered its wings a couple of times and came down again. It was shot, they thought. But the next moment, as another crane from a nearby bush fluttered its wings, the boys' crane stretched out its long neck with a whoop and disappeared into the sky. For a long time the two boys could not take their eyes away from the blue sky into which their crane had soared. Which word best describes the mood created by these paragraphs? A. Celebratory B. Comforting C. Admiring***** D. Tranquil I think 1 is A and 2 is C. I'm not 100% sure if I'm correct or not.

The questions on my unit test for the East Asia and Pacific Rim were different for question 1, so do not have that for sure.

2. c. admiring

Just took test.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:58 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:58 PM

Which sentence in the story best indicates that it is an emergence creation story

Another magic cane brought them to a higher plane, with more light and vegetation, and here was the creation of the animal kingdom.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:47 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:47 PM

Choose the word or phrase that best defines the italicized word. " ...shook our heads in wonder and approval of such exemplary filial behavior." (filial being italicized) A. befitting a loving parent B. befitting a loyal citizen C. befitting a solider or warrior D. befitting a son or daughter

Answer:

D. befitting a son or daughter

Explanation:

The word "filial" is an adjective that describes something that is related to a son or a daughter. The word comes from the Latin. In this case, the phrase describes how the observers were extremely impressed by a particular behaviour that was admirable and wonderful. The observers believe that this behaviour is particularly desirable in a son or daughter.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:46 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:46 PM

Which statement best describes Emily Dickinson and her poetic style? a) Dickinson writes unusual titles for her poems. b) Dickinson writes with creative punctuation. c) Dickinson writes poems that do not rhyme. d) Dickinson writes from a third-person point of view.

To the best of my knowledge the right option is B; Dickinson writes with creative punctuation.

Dickinson most often punctuated her poems with dashes, rather than the more common array of periods, commas, and other punctuation marks.  She also capitalized interior words, not just words at the beginning of a line.

Generally, Dickinson´s poems lack a tittle.Her poems are now generally known by their first lines or by the numbers assigned to them by posthumous editor. Furthermore, she used to write in first person as in most lyric poetry.

Besides, sometimes she broke some of her poems into stanzas, but in others, there were no stanza breaks.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:44 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:44 PM

Compose your own sentence defining the term synonym by using an appositive phrase.

Synonyms, words with the same or related meaning, can be lifesavers when you want to refrain repeating the same word. It is essential to consider the meaning of the word because some synonyms can tell a different meaning from the one we planned to use.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:43 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:43 PM

Figurative language and colloquial language are not appropriate for academic writing

First of this isn't a question, but here we go! Figurative is GREAT for academic writing. It can convey points and make things easier to understand. It also makes the passage more lively, and less boring (No one likes a boring paper).
Though colloquial isn't good for essays, if it is in dialogue it is okay. For instance, it shows the culture of the person, and makes for some interesting reading! "If dats aright' fer ye!"

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:41 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:41 PM

Based on the reading which sentence best reflects a reason the Greeks created mosters?

The Greeks believe in conquest so my guess would be B

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:40 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:40 PM

1. Achilles agrees with Ajax that he is clinging to his anger over Agamemnon's insult. Many of the choices Achilles makes are based on that anger. However, when Achilles sends Patroclus into the fray, he advises him to drive back the Trojans but to stay away from the city's walls, lest he be killed. These actions give depth to Achilles. Describe Achilles based on his actions and his interactions with others. Use specific details from the text to support your answer.

1. based on his actions, Achilles seems to be brave by warning Patroclus and helping him so that he would not lose his life. ( Since you did not provide the text for this answer, just search for some parts in the passage that matches this description.)
2. He has been willing to sacrifice his life for his pride. Since Achilles wants to be the hero so much, he puts his life on the line all because of his pride. His pride causes him to act brave and seem fearless but his pride is slowly eating away at him. Because of this, his pride could just be his downfall if it continues.
3. Because of all his pride and wanting to be the hero in everything to save everyone and to be the star, he went against something he could just not beat because of his pride. His pride caused his downfall.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:37 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:37 PM

Best way to judge the cooking food

There is this way 
1. fallowing what the box says and go by that time or estimated time 
or you can be me expessially with meats 
1.cut it in half and see if it is to your perfection

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:37 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:37 PM

Read the sentences. The siblings were like cats and dogs when left alone together. As a result, the babysitter was careful to keep them separated as much as possible. The author most likely uses the simile to emphasize that A. the siblings were unusually hairy. B. the siblings did not get along well. C. the babysitter was not fond of animals. D. the babysitter was actually taking care of animals.

The author most likely uses the similie, "The siblings were like cats and dogs," to emphasize that the siblings did not get along well (B).

Even though there are cats and dogs that get along well, generally they are like fire and ice, complete opposites. Cats and dogs do not get along and apparently neither do these siblings. The author uses the similie to give the reader more imagery than simply stating the siblings don't get along.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:34 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:34 PM

HELP! Read the following sentence from "the old man and the sea" (1) In Ernest hemingways novel The old man and the sea, the main character is Santiago. (2) He endures severe physical hardship. (3) The hardship come mainly in his fight with the great fish. (4) A painful loss is also suffered by him when sharks eat most of the great fish on the long journey back to shore. (5) Despite the suffering and loss, however, the novel is affirmative and hopeful, stressing the power of humans to reach for greatness and to inspire greatness in others. Which of the following best describes the writer's intention in sentence 5 in relation to the rest of the passage? A) To restate the opening sentence B) To present an interpretation C) To provide example D) To summarize the paragraph

Answer:

The one that best describes the writer's intention in sentence 5 in relation to the rest of the passage is to present an interpretation.

Explanation:

This excerpt introduces the topic in the first line and the following ones give examples of the events in the story of the main character, then the sentence number 5 expresses how the writer feels towards the general message of the story, and by saying that it is affirmative and hopeful despite all the hard time the character has to pass through, is giving they understanding of the story.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:32 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:32 PM

Read the sentence. Past history has taught our community that effective solutions occur only after long thought. Revise the sentence to eliminate redundancy.

Answer:

"History has taught our community that effective solutions occur only after long thought."

Explanation:

In order to eliminate redundancy in this sentence, we need to eliminate the word "past" at the beginning of the sentence. This is because the word is describing "history," but we already know that history refers to the past, which means we do not need this description. Redundancy refers to the use of words that provide information that is unimportant or obsolete because it was already provided in some other way.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:30 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:30 PM

10) In paragraph 1, the word appeal means

The correct answer is letter A: Charm

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:26 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:26 PM

Which sentence uses the underlined word correctly? A. Florence jumped from the dock at the lake. B. Florence jumped off the dock at the lake.

It's letter B due to it being in a better form then letter A

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:15 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:15 PM

Make the following statements: Took Heard Got Gave Came Sold Bought

Take
Hear
Get
Give
Come
Sell
Buy

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:15 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:15 PM

Which sentence uses the underlined word correctly? A. Cecelia walked BETWEEN the bush and the tree in the yard. B. Cecelia walked AMONG the bush and the tree in the yard.

A... between is always used with 2 things. Among is always more than 2. It's a bush and a tree, two things, making it between.

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:07 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:07 PM

Rewrite the sentence using the correct verb form. By the time the movie was over, we left the theater.

Once the movies was over, we left the theatre

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:05 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:05 PM

In the poem "a dream deferred" what does the word "explode" suggest?

Any explosive device going off and therefore creating an explosion

ANSWERED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:04 PM


QUESTION POSTED AT 28/03/2020 - 12:04 PM